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S.S.S: Six Sentence Sunday

Posted by Brenda Dyer on August 14, 2011 at 11:30 AM

This sample is taken from my MS, Love's Prophecy.


Well, you helped him all right. You helped him pick up another victim! And with a face like his, she was certain he lured tons of women; they'd flock to him like bees to honey. What perfect bait he was.

The soft rustling of skin sliding over sheets snapped her out of her frightening speculations. Every muscle in her froze as the soft inhale and exhale of breathing came from behind her. Breeana shoved a knuckle into her mouth, bit down, trying to stop a scream from bursting forth; alerting her captor she was awake.

 

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14 Comments

Reply Jennifer Lowery (Kamptner)
11:48 AM on August 14, 2011 
Hi Brenda! Welcome to SSS! Great six! Love the suspense.
Reply Brenda Dyer
11:52 AM on August 14, 2011 
Jennifer Lowery (Kamptner) says...
Hi Brenda! Welcome to SSS! Great six! Love the suspense.

Thanks, Jenna. I love to read other's six so I decided to join in the fun. Thanks for stopping by!
Reply Jenna Jaxon
11:56 AM on August 14, 2011 
Love this six, Brenda. You can really feel her fear and tension. A great start for SSS! Welcome!
Reply Brenda Dyer
12:01 PM on August 14, 2011 
Jennifer Lowery (Kamptner) says...
Hi Brenda! Welcome to SSS! Great six! Love the suspense.

Aw, thanks Jennifer. I'm glad to be doing the six with all of you ladies.
Reply Brenda Dyer
12:03 PM on August 14, 2011 
Jenna Jaxon says...
Love this six, Brenda. You can really feel her fear and tension. A great start for SSS! Welcome!

Thanks, Jenna. Glad to be a part of the six. And thank you for joining my site.
Reply Brenda Dyer
12:03 PM on August 14, 2011 
Jennifer Lowery (Kamptner) says...
Hi Brenda! Welcome to SSS! Great six! Love the suspense.

Thanks for joining my site, Jennifer!!!!
Reply Casea Major
12:13 PM on August 14, 2011 
Great job, Brenda! Love this six. Can't wait to read more of Love's Prophecy. I love the lyrical sound of "soft rustling of skin over sheets" very nice.
Reply Brenda Dyer
12:19 PM on August 14, 2011 
Casea Major says...
Great job, Brenda! Love this six. Can't wait to read more of Love's Prophecy. I love the lyrical sound of "soft rustling of skin over sheets" very nice.

Thank you, Casea. I'm so glad you stopped by!!!
Reply Eve Edwards
1:28 PM on August 14, 2011 
Great imagery and suspenseful! I hope this is the hero and not a real psycho.
Reply Brenda Dyer
1:30 PM on August 14, 2011 
Eve Edwards says...
Great imagery and suspenseful! I hope this is the hero and not a real psycho.

Thanks for stopping by, Eve. And yes, LOL, the breather is the hero.
Reply Carrie Ann Ryan
2:19 PM on August 14, 2011 
Welcome to the six! Its a great day of the week - and great six!
Reply Brenda Dyer
2:22 PM on August 14, 2011 
Carrie Ann Ryan says...
Welcome to the six! Its a great day of the week - and great six!

Thank you, Carrie! Sunday truly is a great day of the week.
Reply Sheri Fredricks
8:20 PM on August 14, 2011 
Nothing beats the sound of skin sliding over sheets, does it? Especially when I can picture it in my mind! Great choice on your six, Brendan!
Reply Brenda Dyer
8:45 PM on August 14, 2011 
Sheri Fredricks says...
Nothing beats the sound of skin sliding over sheets, does it? Especially when I can picture it in my mind! Great choice on your six, Brendan!

Aw, Mike. Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment. You know I always love hearing from you!