Romance With A Bite
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This is taken from my WIP called, Through The Eyes Of Another.
Marty may be home, but what home is he talking about? That is the question....
With a violent jerk, Kirk bolted up. He drew in great gulps of air. “Marty? Steven?” With his eyes wide, he panted, looking around. “I think I was . . . dead.”
Marty blinked. He glanced at Steven, then the burning car. Sirens whined in the distance. Dizziness gripped him, he sagged and fell forward, spiraling down, down through cold blackness. Images flew passed, but they sped by so quick he couldn't make them out. The walls of the dark tunnel suddenly narrowed until he was literally squeezed through. He must have fainted because when he came to, he was lying on a soft mattress.
I'm home.
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Allison Merritt says...Thanks, Allison. This isn't a romance. It a story about an angel sent to earth to spy--for lack of a better word--on humans for God. God wants to know if we are worth saving. But in order for "this angel" to really know and understand what it is like for us here, he had to be born as one of us, without the memory of being an angel.
Ooo, I like. So what's this WIP about? Give me a run down.
Allison Merritt says...Thanks!!!
Ooo, sounds really cool.
Jenna Jaxon says...Thanks, Jenna. Sometimes I need to take a break from the romance genre, LOL.
Wow, I like this. So many questions from just this little snippet. And the blurb you gave is even more intriguing. Can't wait to read more, Brenda!
Sheri Fredricks says...Thanks, Mike. I think after I start querying LP, I may clean this story up and then try and get it pubbed in a magazine.
So much happens in this sentences, but it's all very clear. Good job on getting the descriptions and feel down.
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